i really like please do another

Any chance of u updating this story?

It's very good, keep it up!

keep it up! it is good! i love it !

Don't forget about me! Great fic! I told u i would review _ And it deserves a review, a good one! Continue soon! ASAP! i cant wait for more _ see ya at the MB and remember our bashings _

I want moooore...(sounding like Kirsten Dunst in an interview with a vampire)

Hey, another great ficcie! -_- I can't wait for chapter 3!

Interesting... The bite didn't have posin in it... did it?

Well well well, this chappy is finally up! And a great chapter it was! That was dasterdly, even for Cassidy & Butch, but they got there's, didn't they? Heh heh heh I can't wait to find out what happens next, the suspense is killing me! Upload again soon, okay Neesan?

Sayanara!

This is a great fic! I liked that winning strategy Ash used, and you have a good understanding of all the characters! I'll be waiting for the next part!

Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next! Lol, I've told ya that already, haven't I? I'll be checking! Very well written with excellent character development!

Hm... (in an einstien tone) veeeery interesting.

So... what's gonna happen now? PLEASE continue!

WOOO! You're getting better SE! That's really good work, Con-tin-ue! ;;

All I can say for now is I like it. Especially after the sad one I just finished reading. 'Bittersweet'. That one is just soo sad.

Well... Writing style leaves something to be desired... It reads mostly like a "first draft" rather than the finished version of the story. I'd try to expand a little on the non-dialogue part of the writing, and keep the Author's Notes away from the main text (try gathering them at ther beginning or the end of the chapter).

But I have to say that the characterisation is exellent - particularly that of Team Rocket! (And no, you don't have to apologise for the horrible puns they make, that just juws that you have a good grasp on them. _) Dialogue is for the most part good too, although a little uninspired at times.

Keep writing!