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man this is great I can't wait to see what will happen. Harry's glamour charm is supposed to be permanent and I know he wanted to see how he really looked like and since Lily is supposed to be a master at charms what if for a way to pave her way to forgiveness or at least acceptance she finds a way to remove Harry's glamour? I also winder will Sev forgive her and possibly end up together with her again?

Interging take I like Jamie! I kind of with there was more Draco play in your stories. Though to each their own. I love you devious twist... Oh the drama, unwanted child, bewitch meant, switched roles... Hehehe it's almost evil but kind at the same time, very contridicting. :D

KCK-Lumcer

its okay

I can't wait to see just what hairbrained plan James Potter might come up with "in order to save" his son Jamie from becoming a death eater in-training just because he was sorted into Slytherin house? How long will it be before Dumbledore tries to stick meddling nose into things again?

I'm glad that Harry's friends stayed true to him when they learnt that Severus was his father & that none of them even tried to abandond him. I loved the idea that Severus managed

to get some revenge upon James by having his son Jamie removed

temporarily from there custody...so that Jamie got to spend time with his brother Harry and his father Severus.

In regards to the permanent charm that was placed upon Harry, couldn't this be altered if Severus was to give him a blood adoption potion...or wouldn't this work? Or do you have plans to address this issue perhaps sometime within the story. I can

hardly wait to find out just what further revenge Severus will

take against James Potter & Dumbledore...and if he'll learn about the spells that were placed on Lily & whether it will change any of his views towards his former friend?

Will either Remus or Sirius be making any further appearances

in the story...or any further action from Voldemort or death

eaters?

Will Lily plan to get any revenge upon her sister Petunia & her family for how they treated Harry? Or were the Dursleys

manipulated by Dumbledore (aided by James) or because of money?

I can hardly wait to see just how Lily might intend to get her

revenge upon both Dumbledore & James...I think that most of the staff at Hogwarts would definitely be against both James & Dumbledore for there actions/inactions against Jamie, Harry but

also against Lily!

Just why does Harry still look like a mini-James Potter clone

is it because of a spell, charm or perhaps a potion or a combination of several of these...(sigh)...guess the answer to that will be answered further on in the story.

Why have the Potters returned now do they believe that 15yr old

Jamie is ready to defeat Voldemort...or has something else happened that brought them to return now?

Personally I think its a shame that Harry could at the very least make a withdraw from his trust vault "before" giving the

Potters the key back?

Because I do happen to think that all the Potters own Harry

something for keeping them safe, yet if Harry hadn't planned

to return the cloak, photographs & trust vault key I can see

the very spiteful James Potter demanding that they be returned

...or trying to get Dumbledore to not allow Harry to be at the

same school as his son?

Absolutely brilliant how the Order defended Harry against the

comments and actions of both James & Lily but also how they abandonded young Harry to a fate that wasn't even his just so

that they could keep there precious James Jr., safe!

I'm heartly glad that both Sirius & Remus didn't even try to defend James nor Lily's actions...and that Sirius later kicked

the Potters and Dumbledore out of his house! After all James

hadn't exactly been a good friend to neither Remus but more so

to Sirius, by leaving him in prison whilst knowing that the Potters were very much alive & that he wasn't there secret keeper. But it is a real shame that no one got to punch James

in the face, because quite frankly he deserved that and more.

Even Lily didn't put up much of a fight against letting a son

of her's be used as bait/sacrifice just to keep her other son safe & alive...some mother!

Love it! I'm really glad Lily had compulsion charms on her that made her act this way. I can't wait for Harry and Jamie to hear that. I also can't wait for something bad to happen to crazy James! He's just really insane...it's actually scary. I really hope to see more soon!

I don't quite understand something here... Harry was considered the Boy Who Lived in Cannon simply because his parents, James and Lily, died while facing Voldemort but Harry lived. How then is Jamie considered the Boy Who Lived since both Lily and James are alive? Was the curse something created by the boy himself, or was someone else there to give their life for the boy as Lily did in Cannon?

Interesting concept though.

CT

Great story! I like the plot very much! I've read several other fics wherein Lily and James dump Harry to protect and train the other Potter twin who is the real -or is assumed to be- Boy Who Lived. The premise of those fics was intriguing and I enjoyed the Potter!bashing parts of them. I am so glad you'd go for something different here, though! I found your twist of Lily having compulsion charms casted on her which forced to be neglectful towards Harry a very novel and interesting one. Versus she being a bad mother or something, you know. Yours is the first fic I'd read about her motivation to ignore Harry as being an external force which pushed her to do it so! Brava! I was beginning to fear I'd always be reading about bad!Lily and being forced to suspend my believing! I really do not see Lily as a bad person. James, yes. He was a right git when teenager, so, yes. I totally can see your James as the real deal. Lily, not so. Thus, my deep satisfaction and delighted surprise when you made Lily as being under compulsion charms which explained her behaviour. Thanks for that! Anyway, your story is most entertaining so far and I cannot wait for Harry's future changes. Personality, beliefs and general life sense. Are you going to made him and Jamie to have a better relationship with the Slytherins now Jamie is one of them and Harry's dad is their Head of House? Draco is going to continue on as Harry's pain in the bum? Or he'll also find out things which change his view of the world around him? I certainly am rooting for a Harry & Draco & Jamie friendship... Or a cordial relationship, at least. Whatever, I like your story so far and I wanna read more of it. Soon. Update, please?

For the whole time I've kept wondering why isn't anyone contacting the press over this?

Harry when it was first revealed to him or Lily now? What is the press saying about the returning potters? Are they on ministry side, Dumbledore's side of Voldemorts? I mean 'Lily Potter speaks out' would be a wonderful headline that would bury both James and Albus and would also make the boys feel a lot warmer towards her and it would also insure Albus wouldn't be able to put any charms like that on her again..

And is Jamie really the boy who lived or Harry? If it's Jamie then how come Harry's touch burnt Voldemort in the philosophers stone? And Voldemort is back but by Harry's blood, right? How come Harry keeps getting the visions if there isn't a horcrux in his head?

What's Voldemort's stance in all of this? Does he think he could lure Harry on his side? The prophecy had a meaning because two powerful wizards believed it. But I could easily believe that by now Voldemort hates Harry way more than he ever could Jamie.

This has been an interesting story. I wish the pace was a lot slower, I think that would allow the characters a lot more depth.

That Lily was under a spell turned this a bit clichee though. I mean before that this has had some pretty good plot turns and twists. Hopefully you have some more planned out but I think I would've preferred it if she had just stayed as a bad mother.

I really like this. If you could have Lilly do something to James.