I did enjoy it. Your poem was beautiful and a perfect tribute for the great deed Oskar Schindler did.

I don't think this even needs to be about Schindler. The Torah references were applicable it, flowed well, and, despite some grammer issues, this was just right. Thank you.

I love this movie, and I liked to find in your poem some words from it. You have expressed in few words the entire Jew soul and history, above of all he nazism's shame; Schindler was an real hero, as today we don't have anymore.

Great poem but a lot of grammatical errors... Also yes Oskar schindler did save lives but there was a price... That price consisted of sex from a lot of women that had to make sacrifices for their families :( he wasn't as great a man as people make him out to be

Great poem!

Okay, this seriously is awesome! Great Bible references! Amazing job!

i think the oskar/oc is a great idea! please do it!

I know this is different but, are u able to write a story (Oskar/oc)? Not a one-shot please. I so LOVE your poem, i think tou can do a awesome job with this story.

Please gimme an answer and sorry for my bad english. Big kissess

Lovely poem darling. It was very moving. I liked how you glided bible verses into your poem to make it more relatable to those times. Awsm!

That was a very touching poem, and very well written I might add. This was a very acurate portrayal of the hand God played in the salvation of those few Jews in the Holocaust who were aided by people like Oskar Schindler. Good work, my friend!

I think love this man. I portrayed him very good. You write more. sory not good ENGLISH

I thought this was fantastic... but you know, I like you, so I could just be saying that. LOL!

I think you have talent... yeah, Im just saying that too.

:)