Abso-bloody-lutley brilliant! Mind you, I'll read anything that stars Riala, I will.

This one was great! It really went into the mind of Raila, Hope and her ocarina were good too. I play the ocarina and it can express somethings better than words. Keep it up, I'd like to hear more "Vengence Quest."

Good story, I liked it...one of the best ones of yours, other than yours at the Wanderers...