|Reviews for The Hunt|
| NeonGirl14 6/28/12 . chapter 4
Just read the story and i thought it was awesome!
| KMS1226 9/16/11 . chapter 4
are u going to write another chapter?
| Katherine Westwood 2/14/11 . chapter 4
Really good! But you spell it 'Serjie' when it's 'Sergej' :)
But the rest was amazing!
| HelloI'm over here 2/10/11 . chapter 4
This was great. Don't stop keep up the good work
| AreYouFrickingSerious 1/9/11 . chapter 2
sorry for my own spelling errors. I'm on my itouch writting this
| AreYouFrickingSerious 1/9/11 . chapter 4
how many showers does Dru take? like a million! what's with that. Inthinknchristophe would smell Anna if she had been with Dru like in the corridors! Who in the world would justbtake a patient out of a hospital? she could die! and why would a woman just hand over her car keys tona couple of teenagers? especially if one is carrying thother? I wouldn't!'bad grammar yet again.
| AreYouFrickingSerious 1/9/11 . chapter 3
this story is dreadful! instead if saying he's you say his and your sentences are really lacking creativity. Christophe wouldn't b so forward with Dru and Dru isn't the type to just suddenly want to kiss a guy. You got her character all wrong and I suggest you re-read the book. Dru wouldn't just ignore someone when she gets caught making out and I think Christophe has a bit more dignity and respect for Dru than suddenly taking his shirt off.
You're in dire need if a Beta and I think you should get one very fast if you want a greater audience.
BUT! I do think this story is going somewhere you just need to pay lots of attention to it. After writting a chapter g over it and ask yourself 'Didni put my very best into that?' and always do a grammar check. Trust me I awful mistakes on my first fanfic.
keep writting and put 100% into it!
| sunayna4sho 12/21/10 . chapter 4
It's really gud. R u gonna write more?
| your mother.D 12/4/10 . chapter 1
Dear Jamie...i think your storey is great and you have a good chance of getting it published keep up the work...:D
| Willowfur and Piper 11/11/10 . chapter 4
Please update soon, thin is interesting.
| sbgilmore08 10/29/10 . chapter 4
Love this! Update soon!
| cheeky-tash-2 10/6/10 . chapter 4
love it! love it! love it :DDD
| izzyfiorent 10/4/10 . chapter 2
Plz let graves come back I like him more then Christophe
| Carly 9/25/10 . chapter 3
wow i love this story.. can't wait for the next chapter!
You got Dru's character perfect i like it when Dru fights she needs to be more of a bad ass.
| RoseRaksha 9/5/10 . chapter 2
Please UD SOON! Please in the end make Graves come back. I can't wait until she releases the next book!