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| Reviews for The Hunt |
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   NeonGirl14 6/28/12 . chapter 4Just read the story and i thought it was awesome! |
| KMS1226 9/16/11 . chapter 4 are u going to write another chapter? |
| Katherine Westwood 2/14/11 . chapter 4 Really good! But you spell it 'Serjie' when it's 'Sergej' :) But the rest was amazing! AngelOfTheUndead2 |
| HelloI'm over here 2/10/11 . chapter 4 This was great. Don't stop keep up the good work |
| AreYouFrickingSerious 1/9/11 . chapter 2 sorry for my own spelling errors. I'm on my itouch writting this |
| AreYouFrickingSerious 1/9/11 . chapter 4 how many showers does Dru take? like a million! what's with that. Inthinknchristophe would smell Anna if she had been with Dru like in the corridors! Who in the world would justbtake a patient out of a hospital? she could die! and why would a woman just hand over her car keys tona couple of teenagers? especially if one is carrying thother? I wouldn't!'bad grammar yet again. |
| AreYouFrickingSerious 1/9/11 . chapter 3 this story is dreadful! instead if saying he's you say his and your sentences are really lacking creativity. Christophe wouldn't b so forward with Dru and Dru isn't the type to just suddenly want to kiss a guy. You got her character all wrong and I suggest you re-read the book. Dru wouldn't just ignore someone when she gets caught making out and I think Christophe has a bit more dignity and respect for Dru than suddenly taking his shirt off. You're in dire need if a Beta and I think you should get one very fast if you want a greater audience. BUT! I do think this story is going somewhere you just need to pay lots of attention to it. After writting a chapter g over it and ask yourself 'Didni put my very best into that?' and always do a grammar check. Trust me I awful mistakes on my first fanfic. keep writting and put 100% into it! |
| sunayna4sho 12/21/10 . chapter 4 It's really gud. R u gonna write more? |
| your mother.D 12/4/10 . chapter 1 Dear Jamie...i think your storey is great and you have a good chance of getting it published keep up the work...:D |
| Willowfur and Piper 11/11/10 . chapter 4 Please update soon, thin is interesting. Willow |
| sbgilmore08 10/29/10 . chapter 4 Love this! Update soon! |
| cheeky-tash-2 10/6/10 . chapter 4 love it! love it! love it :DDD |
| izzyfiorent 10/4/10 . chapter 2 Plz let graves come back I like him more then Christophe |
| Carly 9/25/10 . chapter 3 wow i love this story.. can't wait for the next chapter! You got Dru's character perfect i like it when Dru fights she needs to be more of a bad ass. |
| RoseRaksha 9/5/10 . chapter 2 Please UD SOON! Please in the end make Graves come back. I can't wait until she releases the next book! xx |
