it's a good story but there needs to more renegade storys!

it's a good story but there needs to more renegade storys!

Yeek...

Ummmmm... Great story idea, but the constant run-on sentences were distracting. Also, you didn't stay too much in character... But I guess that is hard to do, since Renegade has been gone for soooo long! One happy thing, you gave Bobby someone to love. I like that! :-) In fact, I'd personally volunteer for that...

It's great to finally find some renegade fiction. I'd love to write some but I havn't seen it in sooo long it'd be kinda hard to keep it in character. Keep writing pleez