|Reviews for Soar|
| TeamFangCuzEdwardIsGross 8/18/10 . chapter 1
(Too lazy to log in.)
that was really great! i liked it! (though it was a lil ooc! but not too much!) i really liked it! it was good!
| me 8/18/10 . chapter 1
it is sooo sweet
Max is 10 years old right?
| SheWhoFliesWithDragons 8/17/10 . chapter 1
This was really excellent, and original! My favorite line, "Meh, a purple, three-headed, fire-breathing unicorn wouldn't surprise him." haha
| Ryan Aiden Storyteller 8/17/10 . chapter 1
Great job on this story! I was pleased to see that you remembered to have Max liking Jeb and wanting to make him proud. I believe other people might forget that kind of thing.
I also say kudos to you mentioning that their wings would be weak from lack of wing usage. Great job!