| Reviews for My Lost Brother |
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sdfg 11/26/10 . chapter 12 Obviously davids will change hher, he's not letting the love of his life die! Even though he is selfish, she's still uNderage, and iif he has the decency to EVEN change her it should be when and where for his choice! |
SunlitMercy 11/25/10 . chapter 12I loved this chapter! I'm sooo glad meadow found out! |
I'm.Crazy.All.The.Time 10/23/10 . chapter 9I just read chapter seven and eight and went to review it and it said that I already had. So there was me thinking ''What'' I hadn't left any reviews because I had only just got back to reading this. It turns out my younger sister had been on my account and had read some of this, like she has done before with other fics as well. Lol. So I can't review them now :( But those two chapters were great and so was chapter nine :) I'll read the rest and leave a review for the other chapters to make up for not being able to review chapter seven and eight from me. |
SunlitMercy 9/29/10 . chapter 11i can't wait to see what Meadow's reaction will be when she finds out she's David's maete! Great chapter! |
southernvampirepirate 8/31/10 . chapter 10she's gonna do that to Paul? aww man, David's so not fair! good job on this chapter:) update when you can:)Jess |
Emzy2k11 8/31/10 . chapter 10Hey go meadow a way to keep the vampires at bay please update soon I can't wait :) |
SunlitMercy 8/28/10 . chapter 9ohhhhhh I hope that it's all romantic when Meadow finds out that David's her mate! great chapter! |
southernvampirepirate 8/28/10 . chapter 9Yay Paul's nice again! update soon! |
Unseelie Necromancer 8/28/10 . chapter 9ohhh i love it! keep going things are interesting! |
I'm.Crazy.All.The.Time 8/27/10 . chapter 8Ah that explains it :) Glad that's wrapped up. Paul's reactions are very real, anybody would be pissed if someone was diving into their mind and taking out their private thoughts... David's very protective isn't he :) And I like Meadows :) How old is she? Because I picture her as an old woman. Lol. I may have missed a chapter or something :/ I think I'll read it over again so I don't keep asking questions which already have answers. Lol. :) I look forward to reading the next chapter. |
southernvampirepirate 8/27/10 . chapter 8Wow, Paul was being a jerk. i liked this chapter, keep going please! :) |
SunlitMercy 8/27/10 . chapter 8DUDE! I freakin loved this chapter! I love how u put britany and bliss in here and I LOVE that David has a mate! I hope there's more of those 2! |
Unseelie Necromancer 8/26/10 . chapter 8cooooool |
I'm.Crazy.All.The.Time 8/26/10 . chapter 7Marko - its with a K :) And I wonder what Anna is going to say to Paul. Is that her powers coming in? The whole skin contact thing? I have a question that's been bugging me since I began to read this. How exactly was she even born if her mother is a vampire? I mean don't get me wrong this is a good story. It's just I'm a tad bit confused. I suppose you could easily say how the hell are Vampires alive... because we don't actually know everything about them. There's still things people are trying to figure out about them now. I hope I'm making sense. I do tend to ramble on. LOL. I don't want to confuse you when all I'm trying to do is ask a question. :D But I'm just sorta of unclear about the whole thing. Do you have an answer or is it that sorta thing that keeps you guessing? Either way I like this. So update soon :) |
southernvampirepirate 8/26/10 . chapter 7i like Meadow! i'm guessing her grandma and granpa was Star and Mikey? mabye? anyway, Belly's got powers! YAY! wonder what else she's gonna get? thank you for updateing so soon, please do it again:)jess |