ohh great startt :D

Looking forward for moree

Please ignore KoumiLoccness.

You're a good writer. You deserve more reviews. You'd probably get more if you wrote a little longer and gave the story more of a plot, because it feels like you just cut it at a bit where the story really hasn't fleshed out yet. Please continue, but take my advice - you just need a more solid chapter.

Even though its a Sorato ficc Mimi is just boring! I mean come on what can of Sorato fan are you if you think that Mimi alwayz the bad guy yo.. Peace Koumi/Sorato Out just cuz Sorato is gaining numbers dont mean you can make Mimi such a jacknut I wish U add Koumi to this and we will see how Mimi plays the game...