 ditena 5/24/11 . chapter 8Great serie Dana! You made me laugh in the 3 last chapters...because you sworn it was the last and yet there was another chapter waiting to be read!
Only one regret though...I wish Diedra would have killed herself after her talk to Jason...out of guilt for Tommy's murder. |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 8A very nice way to end this tale. Thanks for the story Dana. |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 7Time for Jason and Erin/Deirdre to put their differences aside for the best of all. That is, IF Jason can do it! |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 6Well, that explains what happened to Dierdra. Now, onto LOST GALAXY! |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 5Its good to see that Tommy is ready to move on. After all that has happened, its time for him to do so. I hope he can find peace in the afterlife. |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 4A nice way to end the wedding. If I didn't know better, I would have SWORN that Tommy put the request in himself! |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 3So, this is the origin of Dierdra. It clears up much. Now, lets see if she turns good, or gets destroyed in the end. |
 Harry2 5/23/11 . chapter 2Could it be that Rita is turning GOOD? If so, that proves she is to become the Mystic Mother in the future! Only time will tell though. |
 Harry2 5/22/11 . chapter 1And so, Zedd gets his revenge against Tommy and the Rangers by killing him off. Now that Tommy is gone, why not go after Kim and turn her to the Dark Side? Be even more twisting of the knife of revenge against the Rangers! |
 Psycho Tangerine 7/14/03 . chapter 8Your Reunion Series is pretty good. I especially liked when Jason had to confront Deirdra after she had been affected by the wave. And I liked that Tommy was able to accept Jason being with Kim.
I'm not sure if it would be in Jason's character to give up so easily (i.e., try to commit suicide), but I guess you were trying to convey that he was that deeply affected mentally. I also don't think the chapter of Tommy's ghost remembering everything was needed because it just repeated stuff we already knew without adding anything new to the story. But it was a good attempt :) |
 BlueberryPancakes 12/8/00 . chapter 1Too short, need much more action, who cares if the Rangers are crying over something, get to the point! |