beautiful. congratulations.

Love it

R.I.P. Trevor McKinney(?) You didn't see it coming, kid, but you weren't afraid of it either. You changed the world.

I'm going to start that. It's such a wonderful idea.

Aww! This is so sad! Great job!

I love it. You did well. I can see Eugene trying to pick up and get on with his life.

I love this so much! I just saw the movie and this reall summed my feelings about it!

It's kind of like a summary, but it definitely would make someone who hadn't seen the movie WANT to see it. Great job.

I remember this movie well. I cryed at the end.

Good job.

Ah I saw that movie a few months ago. I think I cried during the final scenes...

Nice job. Makes me want to write something about PIF, too.

fidelity(; I really liked it! write more! -"autumn"

Amazing. This is actually similar to what my social issues teacher is having us do. We finished the movie 1st period today and have an essay due on Monday with a paragraph about how the characters ended up like at the end of the movie and after. I was the only one who cried out of almost thirty people. I have to say your story is amazing. Keep up the great work and don't let people tell you that your writing is shit. It's not. If you need a challenge, pm me with an area you're familiar with (I.e. Harry Potter) and I'll see what I can do. ;)

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i absolutely loved that story the movie touched my heart and i never really thought about what he felt about it. your writing is really descriptive and the words just flow naturally it is amazing, definitely write more. GOOD JOB!:)

Wow. Simply wow. Mr. Simonet could TOTALLY feel this way. I can't believe there is only one story to Pay it Forward! It was an awesome movie.

But I am glad I checked this and found your story. Really brilliant. I love the line "He died paying it forward."

It was a beautiful movie... I never thought you can change the world, and I still don't really believe in that (no matter how I'd like that), but this movie... Really made me wonder.

Again, awesome writing. :)

Brilliant story... very well done. Will there be more from you?

As of being the one one in this archive, will you PLEASE tell me how to set up a new one. I want to write a daylight FF but the title is not listed and I dont know how to do it. PLEASE tell me! )

Very good. I enjoyed it a lot. But I'm pretty sure that he was 12 when he died, not 11. I'm not completely sure if it was 12 or 13, but it wasn't 11. Just letting you know, but other than that, it was a really great fic. :)