Cool story! This would be really awesome as a movie :DD

I literally got done with the 3rd movie (and it was the 1st time I saw it) and I went to look for Grudge fanfics and I found this and I thought 'heh heh this should be good!' And I love it how Jacob kicked the kid! I thought 'thank u someone had common sense to kick the stupid thing!' But all in all I love it! Its going to my favorites :)

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omg please turn it into a film its amazing(a)your abouloutely good at this make it into a film it will be the best horror ever!

Absolutely great! its very clever to make a crossover of The Grudge and Twilight. I've always wanted to do but I never saw The Grudge. Shouldn't this be in the crossovers of Twilight and The Grudge? Otherwise people may think you claim that you own twilight (If they don't read the disclaimer...I mean, some people don't)

anywayz. I think you need to improve this story a bit more and the chapters are too short being one paragraph. I think you should do separate chapters instead of a bunch of short chapters. Hope that helps you imrpove. Thanks!

Oh, and definletly a sequal! I think you should do a twilight tale of The Ring or Ringu!

this was great but shouldn't this be in the crossover section for twilightxgrudge? anyway i loved it (:

i likey :)

sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!awsome story!CAMP CRYSTAL LAKE FOREVA!GO KAYAKO!maybe you should do a Freddy Kruger one and a sadako one from ringu!good bye!

sincerely,

kayako saeki