great story really, is not all sweet but still has a hint of love in a very right way for those two

good story

Guh, the sensual prose and the circularity and the dark, twisted dynamics of this relationship, and... wow. You've captured the central tenet of Kuroshitsuji: the hopelessness of doomed emotion on the master's side; the ghost-in-the-machine flicker of something more on the demon butler's. I love the various repeated motifs, and the sense of impending disaster: the idea that these two are teetering on the edge of imminent destruction. Overall, the more I re-read this, the more I discover, and the more I love it.

I really love this story. I like the contrast of Claude's simple mechanics to what Alois wants and asks for. You really captured the dark atmosphere of Kuroshitsuji and did these two much justice. :)

i LOVE this. you manage an amazing atmospheric beauty, kuroshitsuji the way it should be written. 33!

This was so beautiful yet tragic at the same time. I really loved how you displayed Claude and Alois in this. Their desire for each other was incredibly dark and sinful it's almost heart-breaking. This was a really breathe-taking story. I hope you write more of this pairing soon.

seeing as i still hate CLaude, i was hesitant to read this, but i'm proud i did, you manage to get them into character, and much as i think it was short, it had evry thing you wanted to show us.

thumbs up!

I like it, short sweet and to the point