This was really good. I like Horace/Cassandra and I like your fics. One thing though: I would've loved to have seen Halt's or Pauline's reactions to Terence's attitude. That would have been just as good.

i didn't find it sloppy at all. really liked it. sweet yet had meat to it. very nice.

My heart always melts when I read this. I love it when stories make you feel sympathetic fr the characters. Why? I dunno. But still, this always makes me smile.

I am a HUGE Horace and Cassandra shipper; have been since book 4. I was a little sad when the romance between them was just completely ignored then THROWN in there by the end! But whatevs. This story is good enough for me.

Excellent story I must say. I really like Horace and Cassandra as a couple, and I thought the idea was a very good one.I did not imagine that Horace would get so upset, shaking and all, but instead the King and Cassandra would be more angry and he would be very closed about his anger, and he would look emotionless. I was reading the story and was like "come on Horace, say something!"

It was a good story, and I hope you continue to write about Horace doubting himself, because your awfully good at it.

Oh yeah, and update this story, and your others, PLEASE! Update!

Over and Out,

Onewhodigsdeeper

I really like this story. Sweet and caring without being overly sentimental. Really well written:-)

Also, I read your profile and feel like I'm obliged to say that, if you ever do get a chance, you should visit Australia. The Gold Coast, Melbourne and Sydney are really worth a visit. They really are.

Oh an if you ever do come out here, the capital city of the whole of Australia is a tiny little place called Canberra. It's in between Sydney and Melbourne somewhere.

Sorry that went on for a while...

My point is, is that I really like your story:-)

I found that incredibly... touching, fantastic, just perfect. They were all kept in character, which I liked - most people would have made Horace start shouting when that idiot steward insulted him, but that's not like him. You did a great job wiht this. _ Loved it!

That was adorable! It was just so sweet, I loved it!

You know what? You might be the best writer on this whole site! :) I love you're stories! This one is probably one of my faves. ;)It was really sweet and well written. Can't wait for more stories!

This is an amazing Cassi/Horace one-shot! I'm not a fan of those two particular characters, but it didn't affect the fact that I really enjoyed this. I sure wouldn't think it sloppy; I didn't find any mistakes and everyone was in character, and the Terrence dude was the perfect pompous idiot! Great job!

-Dodo

I love this story. It made my day. :)

Squeeee I loved it! It was awesome and amazing, great idea too :) So in character, but I wanna pound Terence lol. Hope you write more like this!

- Mae.

AWWWW! I LOVED it! That has got to be one of the best Cassie/Horace stories I've ever read, but, granted, any Ranger's Apprentice story coming from you is bound to make my top favorites.

Amazing characterization. You certainly knew how to play in that sandbox, LOL. Sand castles, moats, bridges... the whole shabang. That was so adorable, though I will now viciously hate anybody who has the name Terence. I could be walking down the halls of my school and somebody could shout "Terence!" and would result in a death glare that would make Halt impressed. Haha, I didn't even remember that part in the book, let alone make a story out of it. You're a true, brilliant, skillful writer that should write lotsa books in the future.

-Meg

This ficlet gave me an *Aww* moment. I like it.