Sorry it took me so freaking long! I'd completely forgotten about my promise. Forgive me?

You can see the emotions in your characters and I liked that it wasn't as sexual as most M-rated fanfanctions are becoming. Sometimes there's no need for a lemon, and more need for passionate feeling.

Way to go girl :)

I enjoyed it! Was nicely written, I love the way you write with the parentheses. But... it was M! I'm disappointed... I was expecting more. hehe.

Sid - I hope you love me because I love you. This is the first Twilight piece I am reading in a long time (and It doesn't even have Leah).

Anyway - *puts on reading glasses*

(Hm, hm, hm, hm, Oh Laa La!) Bella is eager! Way to go girl! Attack him when they're least expecting. Though, seriously, I laughed (even if the fact she was going to 'jump' him was pretty obvious from the beginning, I still love how you wrote it.

*keeps reading* (Hm, hm, hm, hm, tsk) "Had I been a selfless person, I would've sympathized with him; but as I was undergoing similar feelings, it was hard to be empathetic." - Bella, please, you're suffering too. Put yourself first, no? But yes, this is very canon for Bella. And - yes - this review is delusional. But, honestly, I am having fun.

(Hm, hm, hm, hm, he he) Yeah, Edward nobody can resist us. u_u. I love the ending - you actually made me like the pairing *cringe* which I don't. I shall pretend these are some other random characters who I love.

In the end this is funny piece. I love how you're using your self-challenge (have you written any DG?). You should write Pansy/Ron (yeah, come over to the insanity side) and class *giggles* . Or other things . . .

Anyway, this made me laugh. :)

P.S.

" Edward's eyes did that irritating dazzling thing." Bella would never say that in canon. x)