Isn't Emery Angie Harmons daughters name? Anyway some constructive criticism... a three year old would have better grammar than your Emery; the have lisps and limited vocabulary and they can get tenses wrong but they have basic sentence structure and know singular vs plural by then. Also I seriously doubt a three year old would know the First and Last name of her Doctor, unless she was a prodigy in which case her speaking skills would be more advanced. Most children, if they did know their name, would know them as Doctor _ something. You're character would probably know the doctor as Doctor Fred or Freddie.
Anyway, the interaction is sweet...I just thought I'd give you some advice on the three year old thing.

So I just found this story and I just wanted to say that I love it:)

I love this story! You're writing is fantastic! Please continue:)

I just found this story and I love Maura and Emery's interaction.

I loved the story, really good! very creative. and you write very well, gave up to imagine each scene described in the story.

and jane is what the story? it might be the girlfriend of maura, and help her take care of emery, or perhaps the man who killed his parents return, jane can protect them

This is a great story! Update soon

Love the story. Please update more often. I love this side of Maura.

This is so sweet! I hope you continue it.

very sad but good start

I can't wait for more update soon!

ty for the first review! will try to update tomorrow

Awwww, keep going, i want to see how this turns out