Loved it! SAd to see it end but thank you for keeping this one going! 3

Oh what an evil place to leave it. Thankfully there is one more ready to read. 3 awsome as always.

Great way to end this story. It was a bit confusing but I got it at the end. Sad to see these guys go, mainly cause I absolutely loved perving out with them. Great job!

Aww, I'm sad to see this end. I am so glad you kept with the horror here and didn't make them completely sappy vampires in the end. You had me worried there for a minute when I wasn't sure they ended up together. I swear if they hadn't I might have had to swim across the pond to punish you, hahahaha.

Awesome chapter, awesome story. :)

Wow. Um . . . Hi, by the way; I'm Stargazer. I . . . um . . . I'm not good with phrasing my thoughts. Give me a second . . . . . . Okay, now I'm ready. - I like this story. A. LOT. Simple, to the point, I like how stubborn Jasper was in it, and how determined Edward was in this. If Edward was like this in Twilight with Bella, she never would have been turned, and they wouldn't have had a child. :) Loved this story!

Sorry it took so long babe.

You know I love how this panned out. I'm sad to see these boys go but you told a great story and rounded it off perfectly.

Now, how's about some more EoL? You know you want to.

xxxxxx

Yummm

I didn't think he had mated with someone else, but I am still confused about the "Demetri...such a slut" line. I've tried different contexts and still nada.

I am so going to miss this story along with the Major and Edward. I would love to see something from the Major, but I won't count on it ;-) It'll just be a fantastic surprise if/when something shows up.

Thank you so much for writing, sharing, and continuing with this story. I've been drawn into this story since the beginning. I've read and reread this story so many times and I know it'll be one I go back to many times in the future. I have to say that Amy is so lucky to have received this story as a birthday present. Loved this fic!

Amy was right, I was wicked confused at first, but it all came together. Might you do a sequel or a one-shot to show what happened with Jacob in their chambers? Sounds sexy...

Great work, and thanks for sharing this story with us!

I love the ending,I've been a loving and faithful fan sinces the fist chapter I just had a different pen name. Thank you for keeping them together and taking bella out of the picture, great ending I'm very happy. XD

I absolutely love this story, especially Jasper! I've been hooked since you posted the first chapter. I hope you do write more, and if you are open to suggestions... I'm sure I'm not the only one hoping for an outtake of their mating ;) I can only imagine it would be as hot as all of your other chapters. The blip in the last chapter was a nice tease. Looking forward to more of your writing! Thanks for the story it was amazing.

Loved the ending! Kept me wondering for a bit.

So sad to see this end. Hopefully there will be some out takes!

Great ending. I was confused a moment. Glad it ended well. maybe an outtake in the future, traveling! Some Jasper emotions...thx..gr