Excellent story. You should write your own television series.

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Great story - start to finish. I read it in one sitting. Creative premise with the twins, I was fooled. Never saw it coming. Wonderful character development and dialogue. Truly an incredible story, can't wait to read more of your stories. Please don't stop writing.

You are such an awesome writer! This story is so powerful! I loved it

Great! This is a great story! You are one of the best Charmed writers I have ever see... or read anyway.

Good story - very interesting premise. You had me fooled right up to the last moment. I can't wait to read more of your fiction.

This is great so far! What a good idea!

You are a great writer. I am looking forward to the conclusion of this story and more stories like it in the future!

Uh! Michael is Malevant? Is that it? Okayyyyy... Weird but cool.

Once again I really enjoyed your story and I will definitely be back for chapter 7.

This is very good, you have obviously got quite an imagination and the talent to put together a compelling story, keep going.

Whoa... that was long. I really enjoyed it, and looking forward to the chapters to come. My only complaint is that you don't tell us when it's a few hours later or anything... I figure it out eventually though. WHOOOO!

This is a great story. I am looking forward to the next part.