So very hot. She should let him talk. She thinks she's in a dream, right? When she might actually think it's a nightmare if she listened to what he wants to tell her!

Loved it!

Incredible and insightful chapter from Edward. This is so totally different from your other stories. I like it though :)

I really don't know what to think about this . . . I don't believe in Ouija boards, but I love your writing.

I'm intersted in who Bella is thinking of from the past as well. I hope we find out.

Looks interesting!

God Damn that was some good reading!

Loved it with a passion that rivals the one between our fav couple!

Freaking amazing.

Now that is how you write vampire fanfiction.

A lot of shocks throughout this one, especially with the homo, evil Jasper.

Sorry but not sorry Jazz, but Edward and Bella only belong to each other.

The heart-aching love between Edward and Bella in this fiction almost made me cry numerous times.

It was so beautiful.

Great job, cosmogirl.

Thank you for writing this.

'Til next time...

I AM LOVING THIS STORY!

I don't usually like vampire stories. Go figure, since that's the type that got me here... But I just knew if you wrote it,

I'd like it. And it was so good and I more than liked it.

Thank you for sharing.

XO

Well if I didn't see Alice/Jacob coming, I certainly didn't see

Jasper loving Edward. But as crazy at it all seems, it works to

create the chaos that is Vampire life. Bella should see what she's in for.

I didn't see that coming...no pun intended. I thought Alice

would be getting it on with Jasper.

And I see why Bella would be thrown off by this scene but she

doesn't have those kind of feelings for Jake so...?

Kind of weird they'd do it in the unlocked bathroom. j/s

THE Hottest sex ever. Does it get better than vampire Edward sex?

Not when you write it.

Jacob is so irratating in how he just can't take no for an answer.

WOW, just WOW! Poor Edward would be crushed if he realized she thought she was asleep and he was a very vivid dream. There desire for each other is so beyond what either of them can control. It is beautiful and heart breaking.

The emotions of your characters are so beautifully written. I am caught up in their interaction and feeling such anticipation at where you are taking them.