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| Vane Alasse 2005-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseWow! This is stunning! Wonderful use of words and impecable rhyming and phrasing and meter! This poem is a joy to read! Thanks so much! ~Vane Alasse |
| daima ashiki 2004-02-16 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is so sad. my poor darling frodo. i can just imagine him alone in bag end. this poem was well written, and although you didn't originally have lotr in mind, as you said, i think it fits wonderfully. |
| Mother2012 2004-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is lovely poetry, whether for Frodo or not. I keep thinking I'll go read your stuff, then remember that it is all LotR, not any Real Person. I just don't often care to read the LotR stuff. |
| Werecat99 2003-03-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was so sad... I don't know what it was written for, but it fits perfectly with Frodo. PS Pat you kitty in the head from me. Gingerhead says 'hi!'. |
| amc623 2002-12-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem. Very touching. Amazing how it suits Frodo so well. ~AC~ |
| Elvish Fairy 2002-10-22 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem.This makes Frodo seem more'realistic'.I like anything with Frodo in it but this was generally good! |
| shirebound 2002-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI *just* discovered this, and now I'm sitting at my desk in the office with chills all over me! Wow, this is great. You can say so much with so little. |
| Lomewen 2002-09-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a fab poem. I, being a poet myself, ejoyed this quite a lot, but perhaps it belongs better in the Poetry section of FF.net. |
| Fancy Face 2002-08-16 ch 1, | abuseshort, sweet, and very touching. |
| Thalia Weaver 2002-05-31 ch 1, | abuseso profound! *cries* I love this! Poor Frodo... -Thalia |
| dismal day 2002-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs you may have guessed, I've just gone through your page and read stuff that sounds appeaaling. This is about the ring, right? I think it actually fits really well, altough it sounds (to me!) as though it was written for love in the more normal sense of the word. I really like the idea of the ring being able to sense things ('can you hear me breathing?') and being aware of the people around it.It must be, if it can corrupt them. That's an idea that's hard to get your head round in the book. How can it 'want' to be found? Please ignore my pointless irrelevant nothings. I'm really tired. I have to go now, so this is a general note: I really like the stuff you write, please keep going. I'm sure it's tough when you don't get as many reviews as the mindless crap some ppl post (I agree with emma here!) but just remind yourself that your work gets hidden by theirs. I'll come back and read the rest another time*yawn*. |
| Forget Yesterday 2002-04-28 ch 1, | abuseAnother big wow. Wonderfully worded, great poem! |
| Talking Hawk 2002-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGood. It sounds like Frodo, but I'm just a bit baffled at who he's talking about (besides himself). Who can he hear screaming? (scratches head) Oh, don't mind me, I'm not very good with poetry. =) Good job. |
| The Lazy Fairy 2002-02-26 ch 1, | abuseHow beautiful!! |
| emma 2002-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it, i agree with you, it does work for frodo. don't be put off writing poetry if you don't get more reviews, you deserve them! ppl tend to be more interested in legolas fics, but i say shame on them! |