Ugh... you are such a tease as an Author... I wanted a real kiss at least.

Anyway, loved it. I like how the relationship is developing and I can't help but wish that you make another sequel with a far more serious relationship though this one was a great one to begin a romance with.

Another great job. :)

I've gotta say, you've combined my two favorite characters and it's brilliant! And adding romance into the mix is electric! Love it!

OMG! continue please! please please!

Dumb, dumb donna...

If I were in her shoes, i'd be all over that sexy cap'n

TAKE IT, GIRL!

"It's cleaner on the inside."

HAHAHA! I don't know if you meant to make a reference to "It's bigger on the inside," but that was funny!

Something I think would be awesome for you to do in this story (later on, of course), would be to cross Donna and Bialar's exploratory path with the new Doctor's, along with Amy and Rory. It'd be awesome to see him react to her, and then her react to him, and so on.

Of course, I would be just as satisfied if you had them cross paths with the tenth Doctor. But still, you've got to have one of him come in at some point!