Ol, hilarious! I re-read it once I found out what they were doing to see how everything they said at the start fit in. XD

i'm not gonna lie. i cheated and scrolled down to the bottom to see what the "trick" was bc, i swear, i could not tell if i was reading a jinXmugen or not. but that's just what made so damn funny! good job, a lot of these types of fics are easily predicted, but i can honestly say that this one was not...so i favorited it ;)

That was naughty but nice! It wasn't cryptic, but maybe your note in the beginning gave a hint, so I was expecting the anti-yet-not-anticlimax. Nicely done.

Cheers,

seven samcham