Wakas haha

Yeah I spotted a couple errors here, but they were only concerning present tense. Nothing bad, just that.

It actually sounds cool that they could time travel...or that he went inside his dreams...anyway, I was happy that there was another story about these guys...

You're going to write more? Yay I shall read it when you post it okay? I love ouendan...it's just sad that it gets little attention.

-Stephy