"Wow" was what I thought when I finished reading chapter 32. The story is really good and I am really enjoying the new Harry, even with his manipulative streaks and mean sides. I am merely wondering a few things now, like, will Snape actually be killed by Harry? Or will he be forgiven, or at least left to live? And what about the other Weasleys? Like Bill, Molly, Ginny, the Twins. So yeah...I am now waiting eagerly for an update. Cheers!

Hello,

I am a huge follower of your story "Rise of the wizards". I hace recently registered myself on so I was unable to review in the past.

The things I like most in the story is :

i. Strong story lineup

ii. Realistic Harry Potter.

However in last 2 months your story is losing it's charm because of the slow updates. Please try to update within 7 to 15 days. it keeps the excitement up.

Best of luck for the next chapter.

Loving this so far. If beta work is what's holding back posting further chapters, feel free to contact me. I've done beta work for years and am Canadian, therefore can Brit-pick extremely well, should you need that as well.

On a side note: despite the caterwauling of some regarding the direction you've gone - love it. Don't you dare cave in to the masses!

Lets see... a bit late now but I wanted to answer the question - I wave my hair back and forth is annoying. Who let the dogs out. Barbie Girl. Mmm Bop. I'm sexy and I know it. It's a small world. The Rick Rolled song. .

I really want Remus Lupin dead. He not only conciously destroys the lives of Tonks and the still unborn child, but he also runs off to Dumbledore regarding everything Harry confides in him...

No matter how famous the godfather is, public opinion will not change regarding a werewolf...

I really hope Snape suffers a horrific death...I never liked the character and Rowling didn't do enough to justify his actions...He is just a jealous arsehole who can't let go of a childhood grudge...

Anyway, update soon...:)

About the annoying songs. Quite a few Disney songs come to mind. And I'm not just talking about the animated features either. Some of the old live action ones had horrible singing in them.

Really enjoying this story and looking forward to your next update.

I couldn't help but imagine Petunia's neighbors showing her pictures and articles showing Harry becoming a KG and chatting w/ the Queen! I do know those ceremonies, especially the promenade down to the chapel, are very much reported upon in print and video. The Dursleys strike me as 'Royal Watchers' and I couldn't help but visualize Vernon choking in his seat watching it on the telly and having someone say "Hey, isn't that your nephew?"

If they missed it, I really think Harry should make sure to send them copies of whatever photo's were taken, along w/ something like 'it's too bad we don't get along or you might have been invited!'

well, i'm off to keep snickering to myself...

Eagerly awaiting for it to catch up w/ the one-shot and perhaps surpass it?

P.

Um... A good start and all, the only problem I have is your grammer such as your dialogue. " this instead of this ' would be better...

oh this is brilliant, i couldn't stop reading it (which is not good as it is exam period) even if you do not update soon i hope you finish this story. It would be such a waste if you didn't! Keep it up :)

this story is great an continues to impress I hope it just gets better

Wow, this was unexpected. Even though it was only a dream, at least I assume it was one, it was funny. I kept on thinking back to that movie "The Stupids". There is a scene in it where Tom Arnold sings the song about his family history with him being his own grandpa.

Thanks for amazing story!

What a great story! You do an amazing job writing such believable characters!

Keep up the great work!

-PenAndInk

...'I don't think that they know that we know,' said Andromeda absently as she flipped a page of the book she was reading. 'Though even if they know that we knew, then that would automatically mean that we know that they know that we know, something I doubt they would be expecting to know.' Andromeda was silent for a minute before speaking up again, not looking up from her book. 'I wonder if we should let it be known that we know. That way we would know if they knew that we know about it. Or,' she looked up at her husband questioningly, 'Should we just pretend that we don't really know even though we knew from the beginning until they tell us?'...

I'm cross eyed from reading the above - how on earth you managed to get the above clear in your mind to write I do not know! I salute you - it's on a par with the Vicar of Dibly scene with Alice talking about 'I can't believe it's not butter.' If you've never seen it I'm sure it'll be on Youtube some where. Can't wait to read the rest of this story - it has depth and is believable.

KAHPfan

I've very much enjoyed reading this story so far, it has been a refreshing take on what can be an overdone base. I like how you're putting little twists on things that crop up so much. I also like (I hope this is your story and not someone else's that I'm getting confused!) how you're using English spellings and phraseology.

Cheers,

M