 anberry 11/1/10 . chapter 1*like*
_ Your story just made me realize how much of a torture it would've been for Minerva to have Albus in the portrait, semi-alive... Always somewhat there, but never truly in corporeal form.
And I like how you ended it too. It wasn't cheesy nor expected, as it would be worthy of these too. _ |
 Verbal Klepto 8/20/10 . chapter 1I felt as though I ought to review this, seeing as we're secretly lovers now.
I really liked it. The writing was solid. I particularly enjoy stories with Minerva and Dumbledore's portrait, because I find that dynamic very interesting - having him there, but decidedly not there... I like when they touch hands. That was well-expressed, and a bit poignant.
A general comment, meant neither positively nor negatively: you characterize Minerva very differently from what I generally have seen/do myself.
That's all. Keep writing MMAD. :)
-VK |