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DogFishy 3/3/12 . chapter 1
That was so elegent, and so gentle. Thank you.
anberry 11/1/10 . chapter 1
*like*

_ Your story just made me realize how much of a torture it would've been for Minerva to have Albus in the portrait, semi-alive... Always somewhat there, but never truly in corporeal form.

And I like how you ended it too. It wasn't cheesy nor expected, as it would be worthy of these too. _
slburn 8/22/10 . chapter 1
I always wondered why Dumbledore never confided in McGonagall. It seems so strange to me that he should leave the knowledge in the hands of 3 teenagers. When you consider what you have put forth it makes slightly more sense. That he would want to leave Hogwarts within her protection without her being distracted.
Verbal Klepto 8/20/10 . chapter 1
I felt as though I ought to review this, seeing as we're secretly lovers now.

I really liked it. The writing was solid. I particularly enjoy stories with Minerva and Dumbledore's portrait, because I find that dynamic very interesting - having him there, but decidedly not there... I like when they touch hands. That was well-expressed, and a bit poignant.

A general comment, meant neither positively nor negatively: you characterize Minerva very differently from what I generally have seen/do myself.

That's all. Keep writing MMAD. :)

-VK
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