This story is great. I have to admit that the arrow in the back made me wince a lot. ;

Updaet soon please!

I. need. More. Update soon!

Alart added:)

Love the revised story :)

...Dnt tell me it ends there! I was enjoying it so much! Please please please please PLEASE continue!

Dude, what have u done with Boromir? Hes a great guy.

You have many good fics, but this one sucks

O.o Boromir beat Aragorn!What about Legolas!Please update soon!This is gonna drive me crazy...

Oh this is really good, I hope to see more.

really love this revision... please continue

Hey

cool story. I don't know why but I like yaoi I need to get a cheek-up.

Well any way I liked your storys I've read a hole lot and there realy cool!

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SauronsLittleSister

I like your fanfic but I am French and I don't understand English very well, I dont understand all !

Snif snif, Why I dont speak english ?

please update soon!

Revised version? And I haven't seen this for three whole years and four months? I have to read it now, immediately!

Is it complete yet? Just asking because it hasen't been updated for a while...

i must admit, the first time i read this story, i loved it to bits. I still like it, but i must agree with some of the ppl who review this... there are no real "charactors". Im mean, they're all the same. They dont seem to have any distinct qualities or personalities. Boromir could easily be Aragorn and Legolas could just as easily be Boromir... it's like its the same person, except that they have different things happen to them. I dont know if what im saying makes any sense, im just trying to say:

Sorry AJ, your story is great, but your charactors really are just words, theyre not really charactors at all. They're empty. It's like a story with different narrators each sounding like the last. I like ur story though. Just give the ppl more attitude, personality, all that jazz.

Ta!

ai!please please upate this!I CANT BELIVE U ENDED IT LIKE THAT!this is so good!just love all the emoptions in this story!poor legolas!finally thinking boromir was going to help him..and then..U ENDED THE CHAPTER!AI!ARAGORN U BETTER GET OVR THERE AND HELP LEGOLAS N-O-W!

please please *puppy dog eyes* update this soon!

oh, and also the sequel to "desire and denial" better be updated!

bri

Hi. i've already read the story, but i needed to reveiw again. Sorry for treating this review place as a message board, but i am getting so pissed off at all you AJ haters. It's ok to give constructive critisism (critisism? Meh) but iwas reading reviews of chapter 9 and every 3rd reveiw i saw was one simply critisizing Aj's story. And, I mean, most of em were for chapter 9, which must mean they read the whole story, but if they didn't like it then why did they read it? It's just stupid! nothing give someone the right to tell someone else that they suck or are stupid and should stop doing what they love.

I love to sing, not professionally, but just becasue i like to. But a few weeks ago, my friend's sister told me that i was a really bad singer and to top it off, my friend said 'No coment'. Know, I never sing to songs on the radio infront of other people because of what a simple comment made by one of my friends (plus i realised that i really do suck) but that's not the point.

Now I wouldn't be supprised if Aj never writes another story because of what people say. She might just give up. I saw somewhere down the list "one bad review makes up for 100 good reveiws" or sumthing. I think it's true. I one person out of 100 said that you suck at something, bloddy hell, it's gonna put u off. But every 10th person was bagging out her stories, so think about how that will affect her.

Stay strong Aj, don't think about what those little asswipes say to you, try to lsten to the complements and constructive critisism, your stories are great.

Having said that... HURRY UP AND GET BETTER SO YOU CAN FINISH THIS STORY!