Aw, that was beyond sweet. Only thing is maybe you should cut the paragraph up some so that it's easier to read. IT'S STILL BEYONG CUTE, SWEET, AND ROMANTIC!

Great. Only thing is a hitch I see considering the part. They slept at the Slaughtered Prince before Tristan went to see Victoria. The message was simply something like 'going to tell Victoria about true love'. Something like that. If they had talked about how he loved Yvaine instead, before Yvaine's 'poor me' walk, then she wouldn't have taken that walk. See where I'm going with this? Great story, but the details are a bit mixed up. :)