Again I'm summing up chapter 5 and 6 in one review.

Now I get this Ragnarok business, thank you Occuria! :D Light's wet dream of Balthier was nice to read, it reminded me of the Farplane scene in FFX between Yuna and Shuyin Balthier getting red eyes was creepy, is that Ragnarok who is surfacing and making himself visible through Balthier? :) And then later when Snow mentions Lightning Baltheir snaps and punches him. It's almost as if mentions of Light brings out Ragnarok (or at least unstable version of Balthier). I dunno if that's something you planned, I guess I'll read and find out… I'm still not even 100 percent sure if Baltheir is Ragnarok. Snow's uncertainty is making me uncertain xD On another note you seem to quite like Fran. The way you describe her is almost..tender? She appears as quite sweet and caring, which is a nice thing since my first impression of her when playing FF12 back in 2008 was that Fran was cold and calculating and mysterious, at least in the beginning of the game. In any case I like how you write her and her relationship with Balthier. Heh, I didn't know what the Mist was until now. Source of their magick, huh. I'm finally illuminated! :D It makes sense! And awww my sweet Basch is teaching Vaan how to properly fight. That had me smiling like a dork :)

Sorry for leaving this story for so long! I'm a horrible person, I know D: I can't seem to keep to any reading pattern but I WILL finish this story and let you know what I think about it! ;) …I guess I'll sum up the three previous chappies in this review:

Again, just like in the first story I very much like how you have the person who is out of place (Snow in this case) think about and reflect on the differences between the two worlds. Such as how he's confused about how normal people can cast magick here, that was sorta cute :) I love the tension that's building up between Batlhier and Snow, the flashbacks/blackouts are a nice touch and it keeps Snow reminded of the fact that he has forgotten someone very important. I especially liked the one in Chapter 2 where you showed how Snow caught Balthier back in the Vestige.

…Hehe, Ashe and her miniskirt, I don't blame Snow for looking xD It'll be interesting to see how Snow interacts with the other party members :)

NUUUUH cliffhanger right from the start! D:

This time shift is certainly an interesting idea… I wonder how much everyone will know about what they all went through in the first story. Dang, now Snow's mission is to defeat the chosen one - I sense that's gonna lead to complications. Anyway - I love to read about Ivalice! Just like you I feel more "at home" there haha ;D

Love that song and this was an amazing chapter. They all are so far. Time for the next awesome chapter!

Bwaaaaaaa! I lurves happy endings! So I fail at reviewing, but I couldn't stop reading! I was pretty sure I knew that snow would do something like he ended up doing, but I didn't know how it wouldend. I actually enjoyed the snow ashe moment, but I'm happy they made the choices they did.

Squee! And it's not over yet! Hooray! I definitely have my fingers crossed for more lightning. XD

D'awwww I got a shout out! Thank you so much!

As usual, amazing work. I'm so much more fascinated by YOUR storyline than the official one, lol. I can't wait to find out how this ends!

OMG. This is, quite simply, AMAZING. Snow, what are you going to do?

Vaan! Bwa hahahahaha! That kid is just too darn cute. And embarrassed balthier? Priceless.

Best. Chapter. Ever. I am totally blown away at the dialogue; you managed to really nail each character's speech patterns and personalities. Bravo!

And that closing line - heeheeheehee. :)

I approve of the bromance! That was just too cute! (Add lots of hearts here.)

I don't really have much to say here - the story is so good! - but there's one thing I wanted to mention before I forget again. In this and so starstruck, you use the word weakly. A lot. Lol. Just wanted to point out that it's noticeable. ;)

Poor snow. I can't fault him for his promises. I love him for them!

Haha, this chapter was cute. Although I LOVED the last one, with balthier's side of the story, the humorous bits in this one made it shine. Shiva. Hee!

Masterfully written! My questions are getting answered soon after I think of them, which is a sign of a well thought out story, imo.

Ashe's history lesson - that's a darn good question, boys! It was pretty needless, wasn't it? Lmao!

I feel like this is the twilight zone edition of ffxii. The way the two storylines are all tangled up, how sometimes things seem perfectly straightforward and others it's a steep spiral into some pretty dark stuff and all. It's fascinating! But I admit I want more of the deep dark stuff, lol.

I can't get the image of spiked bones coming out of balthier's forehead out of my head. O.o

So I'm wondering if balthier's acting in a play here. Does he remember that all this happened already? He's almost kind of behaving that way. It's a little creepy. O.o

Not to mention crimson eyes and all that! I'm loving this crossover!