So... wait. Was that the end?

America:(takes out Chainsaw)

Like a wooden door is going to help you for screwing with my mind!

:3

I think there should be a hospitle scene!-(sorry I can't spell D:l)

hospital scene orz...

chp3

Please use spaces and paragraphs.

I am interested in the idea of this but I'm confused by the writing.

This seems rather interesting. I was put-off at the start due to the paragraph long chapters but I was happy to see that changed as I read on.

I have a sudden, strange liking for the Germany/Romano pairing and this caught my attention as Romano still seemed so conflicted over it. I'd like to see a little more depth put into their relationship before they get together (assuming they do) as it seems Germany remains in his cannon state of mind when concerning Romano at the moment.

I'd love to read more.

This is a good story, but your grammar and punctuation could use a bit of tuning. Mainly, whenever someone new talks you start a new paragraph.

Example: the first para should be written like this:

"W-we just got b-back from the m-meeting…" Feliciano said and peeked out from behind Germany.

"You didn't have to wake me up to see you and potato bastard!" Romano said and got off of the couch irritated about the situation Feliciano got him in.

"O-onii-chan, you're sick don't push yourself!"

Also, "...'s" are used to imply part of the sentence is missing, not to denote a pause.

oh gosh! i loved it!... especially the part of the "soaked-wet-germany"

HIII! do you have a Deviantart account? (deviantart is a popular art web page) ... i'm part of a GermanyxRomano fan club community, and we'd love to have such a talented person like you posting some of her fanfiction there too.. (you get lots of reviewers, the members will love your stories)

i don't usually check my account, so if you ever want to contact me or join our community, i'll leave you my deviantart page here... (( ))... see you soon i hope,... hehehe see you

/i reall like this pairing, and I love to think that Romano hates Germany, or at least acts as if he hates him,... because Ludwig looks to much like HRE... (maybe Romano suspects that Ludwig is in fact HRE but doesn't remember or something)

and what if chibi-Romano did like and was secretly in love with HRE when he was little, before living with Spain. So Austria realised of Romano's feeling towards the Empire and gave Romano to Antonio, to get rid of him,... because he saw the little Italian "sister" as a threat (more than the other Italian

, who seemed to fear the blond nation instead) a threat to his place in the Holy Roman's Empire (maybe even jealousy of the little "girl"), considering the obsession of the blond with the Italian little nation, even if the Holy Roman Empire never knew that Romano returned his feelings... And therefore Austria convinced HRE that Romano left on his own and that he had to let "her" go...

And what if Romano expected and hoped HRE to come rescue him from Antonio after Austria gave him to the Spanish man,... but the blue-eyed empire never came because he only wanted Romano to be happy in "her" new home...

So Romano had his heart full of resentment because the way HRE "abandoned" him...

And what if... when he saw the German nation for the first time he had the Hunch that he was HRE(that he was alive)... and loves him, but still hates the man for what happened... and still wonders why did the Young Empire never came for him...

((i also love to think that Romano feels Jealous of his brother, because... supposedly HRE chose the other and not him... and because he'll never be as close to the man as his sibling..))/

Vee I want to see a hospital scene. And OMG the darkness thing would be AWESOME! Btw, can I link this story to my deviantart fanclub? :3

cool a hospital scene! '' (Why am I so exited over that!)

anyway...I guess it would kinda make a good bonus chapter, wouldn't it? *giggle* but still, sweet, Romano can't get rid of that feeling

is weird. ch. 7 is ch. 6 because of the extra summary...

random pointless rant over...*evil laugh* Poor Poor Romano. your Tsundereness makes for a great story

*laugh* it IS fun messing with him, isn't it?

So sweet! Poor Romano! But this is a very good plot!

this is really good.

Good to see you took my advice to heart rather than biting off my head. :3

Although it still needs a little more work, it's on its way.