Awww this was completely adorable. I could actually see this happening in the show. They need to add in more Paystin moments.

Suggestions/Thoughts

Add in more thoughts for Payson. A one-shot can't be completely dialog with a few actions.

For the dialog try and make it sound more like natural. For instance change "Then why did you stop practicing?" to "Then why did you stop?"

Change 7 to seven. I know I sound obsessive, but I've learned for numbers that aren't years to write out the names.

I loved this little one-shot. You should turn this into an actual story, and do something with the two of practicing together regularly. Can't wait to see more Paystin stories from you!

Cute and fluffy. Go Payson/Austin! I love them too. Great fic.

Dude, I dig this so much!

I like how easy the conversations are with them. I commend your imagination and creativity because Payson/Austin have such little (ahem, no) contact on the show. It's great that you can create this between them.

I will go with A, B or C. I really am liking what you're writing for P&A. I can't promise a Austin/Payson, though I think B might be working on something for them, but I am writing a Nicky/Kelly Parker to get it out of my head as we speak. Ahh, I think I'm losing my mind.

Good luck writing!