Oh god... reading this made me start bawling

The grammar definitely needs some work, you should consider getting a beta.

BUT! even though the grammar made me wince, this story was GOOD. i actually cried a little during the ending of Severu's POV and Harry's POV. real sniffles! so all in all, i pretty much loved it.

if i fixed your grammar, would you post them? .

sorry if this review sounds kind of like criticism or offends you horribly, because i did like the story a lot. :D

OMG! Your story brought tears ti my eyes. I was trying so hard to keep them from falling. You portrayed Snape in such a way that you feel his pain and anguish. I really think you captured the characters' essences. Good job! Keep i up! :)

Beta Please!

Oh, I cried again. It seemed so emotional to me, and very heartfelt. I don't know if I want a sequel or not. I usually really like sequels, but I could see this one being done without one. It really worked as an ending. On the other hand, maybe a little sequel to show Harry and Draco happy, despite the loss of Severus, I could see that working. What ever you decide. Great job, thank you.

I enjoyed the concept of the story but the writing and grammar was just so bad that it was really hard to read... I would like a sequel but my advice is to get a beta first.. The story would read much more smoothly and would be easier to understand

no DO NOT MAKE A SEQUEL ! This was the worst story I've ever read pleasae don't write another especially till this one is atleast beta'd. My ADVICE GET A BETA you really REALLY need one. The idea was good so thats what caught my attention (ss/rl relationship-mpreg) but the spelling and grammer were dreadful if I was to give it a grade it would be T for Troll!

****GET A BETA!******

Brilliant chapter. I'd like a sequel.

Wow. Update soon.

this review is for the third chapter...baby draco was so cute!

that was sad and bittersweet

well done, thoroughly enjoyed reading it

Man, I cried again. It was so emotional. I loved how Draco wrapped himself up in Severus' robes. I also really liked how at the end Draco realized that Severus was bringing him and Harry together for a reason. It's still so sad.

yes defently

Ok, I don't usually read slash, but I saw this and just...felt I had to. I am so glad I did. I was crying by halfway through the first chapter. As I'm writing this I'm almost sobbing. It is very well written and I can really feel the emotions of the characters. It's so sad. I wish it wasn't sad, but at the same time it is such a great story.