wow. You have some amazing ideas in this story! I love it! Please update soon - You can't keep me waiting!

wat is w/ the famous last words thingymabob? i need to know wat is going to happen...or i shall die...j/k. anyways, cool story..UPDATE please

Il est tres interestante. Sil vous plait, esbrie plus! Il amuse moi.

Cosette

Oh Pleas Pleas Pleas finish this story it is just so so so so so so so so so so good!

ack! sorry i haven't read any of your stories in a while...but i finally caught up! good story! can't wait to read the rest!

Wonderful! Hope to read more soon! Happy writing!

loved it! More soon!

amazing story! I just love it! More soon?

Ok..I read it. Now aren't you proud? LoL. This has awesome potential to keep going and developing. I'm glad its not what I term as a "dead" fic. Good writing, keep it up!

Oh yeah...lovely author's notes you 2. If I was eternally brainless I'd be entertained by those alone.

I love the playfulness of Serenity and Endymion, as well as the playfulness during "girl time". I loved seeing the outers so much a part of the group, and having Andrew and Helios in this story is a treat! I love the generals and I can't wait to see what happens next. This is a great premise, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

HEY! I'm impressed! Your talents and writing styles blended together quite nicely! Ok, so now that I'm converted to the *dark side* (all your fault you two) I want the next chapter! You guys put it out soon k? lyl! Great job!

I would like to respectfully request MORE CHAPTERS! NOW! Please? With a cherry on top? And chocolate sprinkles?

wow! this is really good. no wonder you guys wanted people to read it so bad. i understand now. this is really good. i got a laugh or two with this. The one about Hotaru and Andrew was like OMG! Don't you think he is a little bit old for her? I mean she is like ten. But hey its really good and i can't wait until the next chapter to comes out. You guys write really good. i can't write for sh** anywho, i hopt the next chapter comes out soon. i'm very excited!

intresting, the generals? coming to crystal tokyo? well this is a good story!

Wow! I love it. Usually when you read a story about Neo-Queen Serenity and Crystal Tokyo they're radically changing the storyline or the characters personalities. In this story you do a great job of sticking to the storyline developed in the show and keep the characters true to their own unique personalities. It's also good because you focus on both the scouts and Serena and Darien. The atitude and mood of the story are fun and intereasting. I look forword to the next chapter.