Wow. Good.

Wow, it was really cool and cute

this story is boring you might want to add some action in it.

not to get you mad

I like it the rise of feelings through the story was great. The Hesitation and then the gratification of both knowing they cared for each other. I love the ending with the rings so you know she called

Leaving you a review It's so lonely in the Angelic Layer section! This story was short and sweet, thank you