|Reviews for A World of Problems|
| Stephanie O 1/28/11 . chapter 12
I like the way you wrapped this up with the interview - I thought it worked very well! Neat story!
| Stephanie O 1/28/11 . chapter 10
I loved the Potterwatch idea to set the record straight - great idea to bring it back! (Kinda like it's come full circle, since they now get to interview the one they were simply "watching" the year before!) :)
| Stephanie O 1/28/11 . chapter 6
Interesting premise! I think it makes a lot of sense that the reason for Harry's much increased appetite is due to adrenaline STILL running through his body.
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| Stephanie O 1/28/11 . chapter 5
For Harry's sake, I hope Ginny's prank doesn't go on for too long! :) lol This is getting pretty good now, and I'm curious how Harry will learn to control his increased power. Btw, "Matilda Hopkirk" is really "Mafalda." Thanks for writing! :)
| Stephanie O 1/28/11 . chapter 2
I really like Harry's cool new wandless magic ability...though it would tend to get old right away having to rebuild your shack every morning! lol There are some parts that are a bit confusing, due to missing words. Where/were are also getting confused in spots. Just something to watch for.
| KMH1 1/22/11 . chapter 12
I like the premise of this story. :)
There are quite a few spelling errors, especially those with people's names and surnames (easily remedied). I think there were a lot of topics scattered throughout that could be clarified and filled in more: the shack, the prank and the block. It read almost like an outline with a couple of important sections of dialogue.
You have a great mind and I really like your style. I don't mean to hurt you with above critique, but rather point out a couple of things that can be built upon. I would love to read more and see your growth as a writer. Please continue. You are very talented.
| Blosiom 11/15/10 . chapter 12
this is a nice sotry and i wish you had contiued. well done. Blosiom