| Reviews for End of the line |
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Guest 2/22/13 . chapter 3 Is'nt cutethat blaster cried because he's the last hamster you'd expected to cry |
Pokemon Ranger-Trainer 8/13/12 . chapter 4That was sad... You should write more of these G-Force stories! You rock as a writer! |
Pokemon Ranger-Trainer 8/13/12 . chapter 3That was cute. And Juarez is alive! Yay! |
Pokemon Ranger-Trainer 8/11/12 . chapter 2I've read this before, but still, I say, "NO! JUAREZ!" Anyways, as I was saying about this not appearing in the archieve, I've looked within the site, but never found it. Then, I used a search engine outside the site, and found it. Now, this story is in my favs. :) |
Pokemon Ranger-Trainer 8/11/12 . chapter 1I've read this story before. Still love it, but for some reason, it doesn't show up in the archieve. |
KayKay9090 12/9/11 . chapter 4Uh...It's not bad but I would rather have Juarez and Blaster together and would rather have none of them die... -_- |
Exmoorpony 12/30/10 . chapter 4Arrrggghhhh! You didn't kill Juarez and I thank you for that. But Darwin? Leader? Star of his own video game? Arrrggghhhh! No, it was really good. You're a good writer. Keep it up. |
MrsEhlanaTomlinson 11/1/10 . chapter 1I luv it! It's mega gd! The endin is sad though, but its still a mega gd story! |
prettykitty473 10/11/10 . chapter 4Wow. Good, yet evil. Some parts were too fast and confusing, but the story was still good. That doesn't make you less evil, though. Pretty Kitty |
OhJay 9/12/10 . chapter 4*Sniffs* That was sad...It was pretty short too, but still good. |
warriorcrazy 8/26/10 . chapter 3Yeah, Jaurez didn't die! YEAH! xD |
bolt fan 21 8/25/10 . chapter 3Good chapter. I'm glad that Juarez didn't really die. |
bolt fan 21 8/23/10 . chapter 2I seriously almost cried when Juarez got killed. I look foreward to reading more. |
warriorcrazy 8/23/10 . chapter 2Juarez, NO! :( |
warriorcrazy 8/23/10 . chapter 1Yeah the first chapter! xD I like it so far! |