Not what I was expecting but very pleasantly suprised, enjoying it very much and can't wait to read more. Hope you're still updating this story.

Loving this :) so worth the reading time! Looking forward to your next update

Just got excited when I read this! Nice work, I wish I'd found this sooner!

wow this update is soo good and such a surprise and i cant wait to see more

Yea a new chapter...well worth the wait. Really looking forward to where you take us and them in the next one.

Loving it! Loving the tension, and the humour about the tension. Poor Dean, trying to sort out his team!

I really enjoyed the action at the rescue, and Lara's recklessness. Can't wait to hear the telling-off she's going to get, and, hopefully, the next scene between Lara and Heidi?

Keep up the great work-can't wait for the next installment!

Amazing as always, :).

Your writing is incredible, and this story is just so rivetting. Please update soon, i just can hardly wait! xx

Ahh; love this. updatee!

I admit, I was a bit leery over a Heidi-&-Lara pairing, but this story totally has me hooked! You've written the angst very convincingly, and I'm enjoying all the other characters' responses to everything, as well.

Please tell me you'll be posting more of this, as I really want to find out where Lara and Heidi end up!

I'm really liking this, it's brilliantly written.. Keep up the good work :)

Hiya, this was an interesting chapter. Much more the confusing german accusative and nominative cases!

I am looking forward to the next chapter. Hope real life is getting better for you.

Em

keep up the good work, look forward to next chapter!

you are creating an interesting story and i hope to read the next chapter soon.

Hey this was a cool update. Thanks for the chapter, I am quite enjoying the story, it will be interesting to see where it goes. A

Another good chapter. Please update soon.

xoxo May