holy cow that was a interesting, cute, sweet first chapter.

wicked cool! it's great so far keep adding to it. i've got a new e-mail address: sorry i haven't been in touch. i'm going to start working on a voltron series in a few days. hope to talk to you soon!

Just how much Lance bashing is there in this fic, because it's really funny to see Lance get whats coming to him.

I read all the new chapters. THEY ARE COOL! I can't believe that nut-case Hagar would be crazy enough to try and poison Keith! I just have one question on that front: Were the slaves rescued? I mean Oran didn't blow THEM up did he?
The entire swimming part was cool. I think it's a great story, PLEASE finish it.

Hi, I would have written sooner, but the story caught my eye and I wanted to read all nine chapters first. Here are my comments:
1. I think the story is pretty good except for when you kill Sven. From the entire show my favorite Space Explorer list is Keith at #1, Sven at #2, Pidge at #3, Hunk and #4, and Lance at #5. (Sorry, I digress)
2. I think it's cool to see a side of the V team that the show never tried to explore. The story you wrote gives them more character.
3. I thought it was sooo cool to see some one nail Nanny to the wall. She needs a vacation (maybe one that lasts until Allura's 35) and should take some time off.
(oops, digressing again)
4. Lotor is getting what he should have a LONG time ago. That made the story even better.
5. The story is cool so far, PLEASE finish it.
6. I almost fell out of my chair when I got to the part about Keith getting drunk. THAT was a laugh riot!
7. Because I don't get to come to this web site much often, PLEASE e-mail when you post chapter 10. My e-mail is deborahmaejeangodwin@yahoo.com

Thanks for letting me comment,
Deborah

This story is really hot. Keep up the good work.

Excellent Story, keep it coming, i can hardly wait for the next chapter.