|Reviews for The Deal|
| Etta.Ju 5/26/12 . chapter 2
It's so dramatic and heart-breaking...Really original twist to the story ;)
| Beautiful pirate 2/11/12 . chapter 23
Oh, I can't believe that you ended this amazing and interesting story (
I like absolutely all! Luke/Mara line was so pretty and lovely :)))
I'm so glad for Skywalker's family - finally they're together and happy (and someone get loved)
Well, I haven't got words to describe how I love your great story!
Thank you very much for it!))))))))
P.S. Hope you will write soon a new story )))))
| FireShifter 2/6/12 . chapter 23
Awesome chapter! Probably my favorite! I loved the interaction between Mara and Luke! :D I have to admit I'm kind of a little sad that the story is now over. :(
I hope will continue to write more star wars stories. Keep on writing! Love Fireshifter
| FireShifter 2/6/12 . chapter 22
A very dramatic chapter! Loved the final confrontation, and I'm glad Anakin was able to save Mara as well as Luke! :D
| FireShifter 2/6/12 . chapter 21
Another great chapter! I loved family moments, especially the one with Padme and Luke. Glad they were able to rescue the slave miners from the Kessel.
| FireShifter 2/6/12 . chapter 20
Alright four chapters in one day! Loved the interaction with Luke and Anakin about artoo.
| Jedi Angel001 2/5/12 . chapter 23
Thanks so much for a wonderful story.I loved how you wrote it,was a perfect ending for what the Force wanted for her Champion and his family!
| Lola Jeery 2/5/12 . chapter 23
That was a great story! I'm impressed by your creativity. I'm also glad that this story was a shorter one; I couldn't wait for the end!
It's also good to hear that you have more stories in your head. So far, I only have three planned! I can't wait to read more of your stories!
| FireShifter 2/4/12 . chapter 19
Another great chapter! :D Yes Anakin's plan sounds realistic, and I can understand why the rebellion is wary of him. I can't say I like this General Madine guy though. He's a bit hypocritical about his distrust of Anakin when he himself was an imperial.
I eagerly await the next chapter! Update soon as possible! :D
| Miss.Skywalker 2/4/12 . chapter 19
great new chapter, the rebels are right not to trust ani straight away, who would in their situation ? (well i would)
im loving the whole skywalker family working together part of the plot, all the little snippets between the different family members are very well written ... can't wait for the next chapter ! i don't want to wait another week :)
| Beautiful pirate 2/2/12 . chapter 18
Han was finally rescued, and whom - by Darth Vader (his future father - in - law).
So, Anakin with Padme, Leia with Han and what about Luke?:)))
| FireShifter 1/28/12 . chapter 18
Yay! Han is freed and reunited with Leia! Anakin and Padme's role in the rescue was brilliant. I can't say I'm surprised by Han's reaction to Anakin's presence is a surprise. I hope in time, he will gradually come to forgive him. However, a clone of Darth Vader is unexpected loop to the story! Now that I think of it, I'm surprised Anakin was able to access his funds still with the Emperor still alive and a clone of Darth Vader in place. I'm guessing the alliance will accept Anakin's slowly at first, until he gains their trust.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Keep on writing!
| Mrs.Skywalker 1/28/12 . chapter 18
amazing ! i loved the rescue of han and how he an leia were reunited, very well written, i can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up :)
| Treenahasthaal 1/28/12 . chapter 18
Palpatine having another Vader was a surprise - I guess he thought that his position would be weaker without him, more open to his power being questioned without his enforcer by his side.
An interesting twist.
| Treenahasthaal 1/24/12 . chapter 17
Hi! I have spent the entire evening reading this fic and I have to say that I have found it to be fun and entertaining. You have an interest premise with Vader/Anakin leading double. I liked how she was slowly swallowed by the persona of Darth Vader until Anakin was almost unrecognisable.
The father/son relation was handle very well - I especially like Luke's rebellion and teenage angst! : )