 Memeal 8/24/04 . chapter 1It's old and it's far past, but it's only got three reviews and it's far better than that.
Wow.. just... Wow. I love the congolmeration of images and how they come together to form an impression without telling enough of the story.. just like a good vid! I'm very impressed. |
 Wooden Ears 12/26/02 . chapter 1grrr this fic made me cry and now i have a snotty nose, but it was a great fic anyways! see ya |
 RiNoA 3/12/02 . chapter 1 Ummm...REALLY confusing? I really don't get what's happening...you jump from one thing to the other all of a sudden, then go back, and etc. You should stick to the point more. |
 Amalthaea 2/27/02 . chapter 1 This is really confuzzing. If you'd stuck to one scene instead of going through memories and the currnet scene, it might have been better. |