Your writing is exquisite and the pictures that you paint in my head could keep me entertained for eternity! :) you are extremely talented and i only wish i could be as tanlented as you someday Xoxxox

this is..PERFECT if this is what you call "isn't very well written" then i cannot wait for an EVEN BETTER CHAPTER(:

This was actually so sweet! It would've been even better if you'd separate each person's lines but it was still great. I'd amused myself with the thought that if someone from the crew had caught David and Sel kissing he could have taken a photo and the director would've told them "this is a wedding present for you and ammo for the Jalex fans" LOLOL

Good Story