great story

A great read, Evey Edge. I really love how you got into Mack's head, his voice is coming through strong, especially in the first chapter. I get a real sense of the inner conflict he's going through.

Would have loved to read your version of what happened in the Motel, not just as Mack is remembering it, in more detail.

Will you carry on with this story?

Great fic! I loved it.