hi my name is melissa marie malone im 20 years old and my biggest thing is to meet the stars of big time rush because if i do meet them i would be the happest girl ever if you make this happen on january 23 2013 is my birthday and i want them to sing to me. if you wach channel 6 tommorrow night at 6 at CBS news im going to be on tv so if you wach it i would say a prayer for you how kind you are. i love waching big time rush and singing your songs i would like to meet you so much

Overall, it's a nice story. It went a little fast and there were spelling and grammar errors. It wasn't terrible, no, but it wasn't the greatest story ever either. What I mean is that the concept is great and I see you have wonderful ideas, but it seems to be cut a bit short. Also if you're introducing OCs, then have someone in your story explain who they are or you can explain them in an Author's Note. I had no idea who Lavonne was and it confused me a little. Not to say that he wasn't a good character, I thought he was kinda funny. Otherwise you stayed pretty much in character.

Bad story

i like this ficc

You can make the sequel, please?

Absolutely CUTE! It's cool how you added the video diary in there. And Charlie saying 'Carlos,Carlos,Carlos', IS ADORABLE!

Little Miss Maslow

suscribed and favorited and UP-DATE!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Can't wait!

keep going