LOVEEEEEEE IT! Gotta love the unexpected pregnancy's..they make everything so much juicer! WRITE MORE! U ALWAYS WRITE GOOD ONE CHAPTER STORIES THAT SHOULD HAVE MORE CHAPTERS...COUGH.. dance one..I think u wanted to write about a girl named Mickey dating somone...IDK im not sure! BUT AMAZING STORY KEEP WRITING :D

you should maybe do a ten chapter story. i agree edward would make a hot peter pan

hahahaha! lol this was cute. i could totally see edward being peter pan!

i like this story a lot. it was cute and simple. all the other stories on here has so many plots in just one story and sometimes are confusing. (not saying there aren't really good ones on here...but you get what i mean :P)

i think you should keep it as a one shot. thats just my opinion though. and i dont have a real reason for it so yea...

LUUUUUCKY! you went to disneyland?awww i wish i went there. how was it?