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rainbowspring 4/2/12 . chapter 1
I love the last line, LOL! :D
DirectorOfDreams 11/19/11 . chapter 1
...Eagles are better than unicorns, snakes, and lions combined! RAVENCLAW PRIDE!

Great story! So cute and I loved it! ;D
rainbowspring 2/18/11 . chapter 1
I like the idea of Draco at a muggle cvarnival! I also liked how you portrayed Astoria! This was very cute!
OurLoveIsForever 8/23/10 . chapter 1
That was so cute! Very original! Bravo.
TuesdayNovember 8/23/10 . chapter 1
That put a huge grin on my face. That was very well written and very funny.

Great job! D
away she'd fly 8/23/10 . chapter 1
Haha that was too cute (:
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