This was very, very cool. I really liked how you handled the epilogue here. So the Titans of the "Future" that this story is about (I guess?) were watching the events unfold and what not? That's really nice.

I loved Rachel's recollections of her time spent on Earth and how Dick and Barbara really became her real family, even if Kori/Starfire was her birth mom.

All in all.. I really enjoyed this story a ton, Ben. Fantastic job.

Oh, great chapter, and I notice with the next one you completed this. I have to admit.. I came into this story not sure what to expect as I've never been a "huge" Teen Titan fan, but this was..just really enjoyable. Also, when I saw this line, I thought of Kim Possible's Dad:

"Don't forget," he whispered. "Shovel, hole, deep."

Just laughed so hard.

Oh wow. And I laughed at Vic's "Whoever and whoever" line, Haha. I can picture Dick and Barbara's faces. I hope this works out this time. D: I really can't wait.

nice chapter, keep it up!

Awesome chapter once again here, Ben. Really enjoying this fic. Lol'd Kitten.

Another great chapter but in a completely different way - a wonderful fight scene, nice descriptions of both the interplay and the tactical - overall a superb job!

I'm trying to get the word out - this is a brilliant fic!

LJ

I'm definetly loving this. Keep writing. And uh, isn't it Marv Wolfman? xD

Awesome chapter here, Ben. Very intriguing there at the end. Looking forward to more of this.

Well, I did see it coming! Stored Nightwing sperm!

An incredibly engaging story, can't believe it isn't getting more reviews. Definitely a favorite. Thank you for the frequent updates.

GREAT JOB!

DUDE, NO WAY! That was a major twist... YAY

Very interesting second chapter - I liked the love/hate between Babs and Kory and can imagine Kory being that gracious, Babs, and humans in general - that gracious not so much.

As for the plot 'hole' - there are some species that retain sperm within the female tract for months to a year prior to fertilization, awaiting a better time... I wonder if that's the way she had the boy wonder's baby...

well written, very engaging tale - great job!

LJ

Ahh. Yeah, I definitely don't think Dick cheated on Barbara or anything, though it still makes me wonder just how Rachel came to be. This is very interesting, Ben.

Also loved the 'battle with words' between Kori and Barbara. Keep up the great work with this little ditty.

Wow, this should be a very interesting story. You've put up front that you've played fast and loose with the time lines and story lines, so I won't point anything out. I'd wonder if Tamaranean culture would frown upon unwed mothers (according to the comics, they wouldn't) but I see how you need it for your story.

One minor pet peeve, Starfire actually doesn't say 'Friend Whoever' - well once in the TTGo! comics - but otherwise things were fairly in character.

Again, it looks great: good drama, a great opening chapter where you start off with a bang, good story construction... nothing wrong here!

I can't wait for more!

First off.. Hi there, BenRG. Been doing well I hope?

As far as the story, I've always been a fan of both Robin/Barbara and Robin/Starfire, but I really like how you wrote this and paired the others off. Still.. I was very surprised to see Starfire's child being Robin's. I guess it was during one of those moments before Robin and Barbara married? Unless they've been married longer..