|Reviews for The Lion and the Unicorn|
| animefan24 12/7/10 . chapter 9
OH WOW! :D
DAT'S HOW OZ LOOKS LIKE IN A CHAIN FORM!
SOOOO KOOOL! I LUV IT! IM GONNA PRINT IT OUT AND STICK IT INTO MY WALL! XD if my printer ever works -.- suckz.
anyway...i was surprised dat lottie... u noe 2 oz. AND ALICE WAS THERE! RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM! DX
ill say dis clearly... ahem... OZ AND ALICE BELONGS 2GETHER!
STUPID LOTTI KISSED HIM AND ALICE HAS 2 SEE DAT HORROR!
luv it though. :) hehe.
_ animefan24 :D
P.S. srry if i suprised u. im just saying dat they belong 2gether... seriously. LUV YA! :D
| Blackcat0989 12/1/10 . chapter 9
... lotti's going crazy... and i NEVER saw that kiss coming...
i never knew that you like Ozlotty... huh... *shrug*
anyway, great chapter! :D
| WolfspiritSD 11/29/10 . chapter 9
I was wondering when it would come up.
Hmmm. the plots coming together more now. LOVELY! It's all starting to make sense. :D
OzxLotti? ... really? REALLY? Jeez... I could've lived my life with out even think, even knowing about that pairing and you have to mention it! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
And thank you for putting a link to my picture. :D
| TwilightKat777 11/29/10 . chapter 9
I love your writing, plot and how you write the characters. It almost seems like you stole it from Jun Mochizuki himself. I'm extremly happy that Sharon is finally awake.I just hope that she can clear up this hole misunderstaning before it's too late...
| lotbe 11/2/10 . chapter 8
So, ah... I'm new at PH community and I think your story must be one of the most awesomes I've ever read. :D
You see, I'm not really that into Gil, but you wrote him and he turned out to immensely makes sense to me. And Oz seems just perfect. :)
As for Alice, she's my favorite character and I love her. You are completely rid of any OOC-ness that kills the mood, so I love you too. :D
And then, Lotti! Oh, how I ADORE her! I like reading OzAlice stories, you see. And I'm just so lucky to find your story where there's Alice owning Oz as her manservant.. and also LOTTI! Woooo! XD
...Uhh, wait. I think I forgot to mention Sharon and Break. How awful of me! They're, like, the most awesome characters in PH! Anyhow, they're totally awesome and I love them so much. Again, they're very in-character here, so yay!
In short, you're an awesome writer with an awesome story that contains awesome plot. You have awesome characters in your fanfiction and you wrote them so awesomely... Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
PS. I know there's a lot of 'awesome' there... But, you see, you really are awesome, so I don't know what else to say.
| WolfspiritSD 10/29/10 . chapter 8
Wooh! Update! and just in time I finished the picture!
Oooooooooohhhh! Turn of events! Poor Oz...
I love how you show the slow insanity that Oz is falling into. Slow but still there... creepy.
You're doing well at getting Oz's character, by the way.
and I love Alice's all knowing-ness of Oz and his moods. :D
You're revealing the plot little by little... and it keeps you interested and wanting more. So please update soon!
| Blackcat0989 10/28/10 . chapter 8
poor oz... is Michael dead? i can't tell... poor oz... ozzy-kun... *cries*
anyway, great chapter! but Oz is acting a bit to happy... as in... 'more-than-even-fake-happiness-happy'... which is very happy... happy
| The Puppeteer Master 10/13/10 . chapter 7
I always thought that Oz could be a chain...
| Iceqbz 10/8/10 . chapter 7
Really liked the chapter :). I agree. It is really hard to pin down Oz's character. He's too weird. And different events led him to be different in many ways, and all that. Well I think you've done a great job with his character :D. Lotti, well you can never be certain with the Baskervilles. They have the weirdest mood swings and all that. I classify them as bipolar XD. Still you've kept as best as you can in character and that's great, cuz you've done a great job in it :)
| Blackcat0989 10/8/10 . chapter 7
... no... Oz-kun...
anyway, very good once again, but there's a little bit i didn't get. it said that Alice plucked the crown off Oz's head, but he never put it on...
and that's about it... UPDATE SOON!
| Rinnesuke 10/8/10 . chapter 7
I think this story is fantastic and I think I've reviewed before. The way you write is awesome-I can see oz's distress. Like you said, reviews boost your ego, right? I only have 1 review for my stories so please help review them!
| Pholo 10/4/10 . chapter 7
GOOD GOD, PERSON, WRITE MOREEEEEEE! xDD I NEED TO READ MORE!
Sorry, hope I don't scare you xDDD
This is great. I couldn't stop reading this morning.
Because of that I had five minutes to get to school *eye twitch* BUT I MADE IT THERE IN TIME AFTER FINISHING READING! WOOT! XD
And then during math class for some reason I kept zoning out and thinking about Oz... HE HAD BETTER NOT GO INSANE! *shakes him* DON'T, YOU HAVE TO HANG IN THERE.
*shoots unicorn* There. Now it eez deads.
| animefan24 10/4/10 . chapter 7
AHHHHHHH! I love this story! keep up the good work, Starling-night :) and i hav a quiz 2 do 2morrow for my spanish class... -.- but WHO CARES! I LOVE THIS FREAKIN AWESOME STORY! make more chapters plzz! thanx :D
| Iceqbz 9/30/10 . chapter 6
Awww that actually made me sad although these people are jerks! Well it did always show the Baskervilles humanness but it is very hard to actually understand just how human they are. The have feelings, they protect each other, but they kill merciless if asked by their leader or just because they want to. It's all very weird : Anyways I loved this chapter a lot. I really hope you update soon!
Oh and omg! What's gonna happen with Oz? What about Sharon? What about the Unicorn? D: ! I feel like someone is going to come out saying "Find out next Tuesday, 7/8 central only in(insert a channel here)" Lol XD
Yeah so good chapter, loved it, update soon :).
| WolfspiritSD 9/26/10 . chapter 6
Yes! An update! Wooh!
I Love this story, so far. Written well, with amzing ideas!
Oz's chain form thing as a lion! EPIC!
And I never would have though that I would feel sympathy for Lotti and Leon. Especially Leon. He was awesome! Why did he have to die. T.T
Now I really want that damn unicorn to die!
YOU ARE ADDICTED TO CLIFFHANGERS! It's EVIL! ... well not really, but oh well.
Meh, I don't think it really has to be in the timeline. It's just there. and it's fine just being there.
Once again. I LOVE THIS STORY!
please update soon. :D