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Akuro13 10/30/11 . chapter 1
/amazing/...love the descriptions and the interactions and I completely agree with you on your A/N 2.

their connection and bond is so strong, I just love it.
P3MF Alpha 3-Richter 8/20/11 . chapter 1
I remember reading this before and I did enjoy the theme of the story.
EpsilonFreak 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Eeeeeeeeeeeee i loved it! ive only read one fic about then like that i absoulutely love it! keep on writing please! EpsilonFreak
Battleshiplid 6/9/11 . chapter 1
Brilliant!
Noverael Parabatai 3/14/11 . chapter 1
I-surprisingly, to me-loved this. I almost clicked back when I saw it was dragon Toothless, but you're right, Toothless isn't exactly an animal, so I read on. I must admit, it was really good, and I deeply enjoyed it. I mean, the sex was... sort of odd to read, but it turned out being pretty hot.

You've got a really wonderful writing style, and I really loved the whole idea for this.

And haha, lol, I was totally the same way when I watched the move, I mean, they were totally supposed to end up together. And while I usually prefer either human transformation, or half dragon, this actually got me hard. ;p
TealEyedBeing 1/26/11 . chapter 1
Simply put: I LOVE IT x3
Pish 1/23/11 . chapter 1
Oh love, your commentary is reflected.

Haha, that was lovely. Please do write more of this pairing
animepunk314 1/19/11 . chapter 1
WOW...*GLOMPS* I LOVE U!
RaiineDays 1/17/11 . chapter 1
This is actually my second time reading this fic. I hadn't watched the movie when I'd first read it, though I still thought it was great, an interesting idea and great writing. I've re-read it now that I've actually watched the film and I really love this fic even more. I didn't actually dislike Astrid but they didn't quite fit as a couple, I think.

I like that Toothless is still a dragon. It makes things more complicated but you did a good job with it. I'd love it if you wrote some more fics like this :).
Mashulika 1/11/11 . chapter 1
Oh! That's a wonderful story! And yes, I also want to kill Astrid since the first scene. And Toothless such a sweetheart, cutie,HONEY! Do you plan to write another story about that couple? I would like to read it! Thank you!
luckycharms92 12/24/10 . chapter 1
Eh, never was a big fan of Astrid. This was awesome! I loved it! Cute pairing and honestly I was thinking along the same lines when I watched the movie. _
Momma Lici 11/17/10 . chapter 1
oh my cheese, you too, huh?
AW-66 11/9/10 . chapter 1
Very, very good. A very well written story, where toothless is _not_ human. Thank you for this. I'm definitely not a huge fan of astrid, and I much prefer this pairing. Please continue!
Dragons Are Hot 10/29/10 . chapter 1
*coughs*

There are a lot of things I like about this fic. Otherwise, I wouldn't be reviewing, as I am a lurker generally.

For one, I like that you're literate... nothing is more annoying than a story with a great idea, and horrible, horrible grammar/spelling/etc. *shudders* But you did really good!

I like that it has dragon!Toothless and not human!Toothless... Not that I necessarily dislike those fics, but it's... not really toothless anymore to me if you make him human.

I also like that you made a theme of the 'wrong/right' part. It goes really well with this couple. Hiccup, for one, is 'wrong', but ends up being 'right'. Haha, that's just his character.

I also can't stand stories that sort of brush over the fact that it's wrong, by either not mentioning it, making him human, or making Hiccup find it okay... although I wouldn't mind a story or two where Hiccup found it okay for logical reasons... I mean, a lot of the older cultures, and more 'rough' ones, don't actually frown on bestiality. Although it wasn't considered as good as a 'woman', they would pretty much have sex with anything, and it was okay... Because men had to 'relieve their urges' hahaha. And if the Norse were anything like the Greek, their gods were often involved in bestiality hahaha. Srsly.

And now i've used a review as an excuse to come up with ideas. This is why I don't review much.
FireChildSlytherin5 10/21/10 . chapter 1
They are a cute couple. :P

Nice one-shot.
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