Sad one. :(

awesome!

Awh, this is beautiful.

Interesting. At first I thought it was a canon story, but then I decided it wasn't. I thought the first two sections, the dark and angsty ones were very strong.

these were really good poems.

oh that is so sad and sweet at the same time *shakes head*

it was so pretty though :)

Much love!

I never used to like poetry. Mostly because of the hidden meanings I didn't get. So it's been a long time since I've read some. And these were great! I felt really sad for her. Very nice work.

So few words yet so much said.

Very, very good.

yaaaay

i love it

i almost had to cry when i read it!

you are wonderful!

Whoa.

I was surprised that the beginning of this poem didn't warrant an "M" rating.

-Q

Those poems were an excellent way to tell the story... so sad, and yet there is hope at the end for a better tomorrow. Great work.

Interesting evolution.

That was... Beautiful, for lack of a more meaningful word.

It almost brought tears to my eyes.

In short, this is an amazing piece of work, and I hope you do more soon.

Anna

Beautiful poems :)

I love these poems...so visceral and staccato, but it completely works! And an interesting twist to Edward's self-loathing.