How close this hits to home. Who among us hasn't had thoughts similar to this at some points during our lives? Thanks for putting pen to paper and giving us this.

Lovely... sad and sweet just awesome.

This is beautiful.

Emotional.

It's really sad that there a people out there who actually have thoughts like this everyday and feel they have no one to turn to.

Your poems brought a tear to my eyes. The beginning poem where she talks about her "problem" and her "solution", then her self-loathing over not being able to execute the plans is quite painful.

The remaining poems where she has a glimmer of hope and then it comes looking for her: well, I found them to be bittersweet.

Lovely.

Beautiful.

Very different from Alphabet Weekends, refreshingly change from the other stories I read, actually.

Waiting for the next update. :)

p.s. I assume you wrote the poem? If so, amazing job. Really gets through without being too evasive.

-Cheela

wow, beautiful...

nice.. I like it