 professionaldooropener 5/7/05 . chapter 14OMG! i can't beleive you havn't updated in like three years wow but couldn't you just like finish this story and have it done i mean come on cause i love this story soo could you update please |
 to good to be true 4/13/03 . chapter 14 You have to write more and son |
 11/29/02 . chapter 14 yo man that was a great story. so wen will da next chapter up?well thats all i haf to say. bie now. |
 IniRniDefunct 11/28/02 . chapter 14*laughs at ur A/N* hahahahahaha, and that chapter was cool! I can't wait for the next one! |
 Starlight 11/24/02 . chapter 1 Hi, This is my first time reviewing a story but i loved your story!
(by the way u posted the same chapter twice) |
 Hairless-Wookie005 11/20/02 . chapter 14! WHO SAID YOU COULD MAKE A CLIFFY? :'( PLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAASSSSSSSSE hurry up!
Pretty please with cherries and pizza and cake and ice cream and teriyaki chicken? Ok, that doesn't usually work, but what the hey.
I love this ficcy! If you don't hurry up, I will send my emotional pastries after you! (Seen in chello's profile)
I just love this!
The moon never beams without bringing me dreams of chocolate covered raisins...
^_~ baibai |
 Kutie-Pan 11/18/02 . chapter 14PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE, update, I LOOOOVE your story, so PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE. O.o;;; hehehe.
Please update I love your story. |
 11/17/02 . chapter 14 changelings=icei-jin=cold family |
 Super Bob XxWooshxX 10/28/02 . chapter 4I have read the first four chapters as you can see, but it's 11:30 at night and I have to put away the dishes and got bed because I have school tomorrow, I'll finish reading your story tomorrow ^_^
~*~ Majin Bob ~*~ |
 Nel the Wicked 10/28/02 . chapter 13PLEASE continue!I love this story! I'm even going to try and write a T/P story but i'm writing it on paper first. PLZ tell me when you get time to update! |
 Kutie-Pan 10/28/02 . chapter 13Hey please update soon. i love your story. so PLEASE update. |
 Brianna 10/27/02 . chapter 12 NOOOOOOOO! Evil Cliffy... Can't wait for the next Chapter... I hope Pan wipes floor with Marrons face which looks like her ass. Oh, and Midnight rocks! I love the part when she said.. " Chosen One are you sure you want to fight. Just give the word and I can have her ripped to unrecognizable pieces." Midnight pleaded. " UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
 Kutie-Pan 10/27/02 . chapter 12PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE updae PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, i love your story. so PLEASE update |
 Hope38 10/6/02 . chapter 11This is a great story and I think you
should continue it. |
 IniRniDefunct 10/4/02 . chapter 11OH MY GAWD! They were FLAMING YOU! GAWD! I love this story! I don't believe this... I will take those flamers down! hmph.. maybe not... but... PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE! You really have to okay? Okies? OKIES? I even have this story in my favorite stories! please! keep writing! |